Will give all your posts a full go-over later when I have more time (still have to review the text), but with a quick glance at your plates, my main comment is the ARCHITECTURE needs to read much more clearly than the figures you insert in the image. Make your formal 'sins' much more apparent in the sequence of images. (your stripper and lamp/leg will consume all the focus). More comments later.
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This page contains a single entry by Zoe Chan published on October 22, 2009 11:15 PM.
Hi Zoe,
Will give all your posts a full go-over later when I have more time (still have to review the text), but with a quick glance at your plates, my main comment is the ARCHITECTURE needs to read much more clearly than the figures you insert in the image. Make your formal 'sins' much more apparent in the sequence of images. (your stripper and lamp/leg will consume all the focus). More comments later.