sorry tarek - forgot to check. plan is better but is really difficult to read lineweights online so will hope it looks good printed?
section - foundation looks ultra dinky, ground looks too cartoony, sky too illustrator-y and internal texture doesn't match all the rest. focus on important info - interior and try to recreate it similar to plan (ie, make all the other stuff a bit more background-y...
perhaps also circle extensions in this drawing? you do it with borromini, so why not with this drawing - it may save it in the end.
you @ aa tomorrow? i can come by to help with pic if wanted. n
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This page contains a single entry by Tarek Shamma published on August 1, 2009 2:22 PM.
sorry tarek - forgot to check. plan is better but is really difficult to read lineweights online so will hope it looks good printed?
section - foundation looks ultra dinky, ground looks too cartoony, sky too illustrator-y and internal texture doesn't match all the rest. focus on important info - interior and try to recreate it similar to plan (ie, make all the other stuff a bit more background-y...
perhaps also circle extensions in this drawing? you do it with borromini, so why not with this drawing - it may save it in the end.
you @ aa tomorrow? i can come by to help with pic if wanted. n