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image 5 (bottom) looks like applied material is skulls and / or owl heads. odd. adjust.
4. light wash is too uniform - need brightness and dark corners - each shell is lit as though by photographer's diffused lights. the seams/edges need to be much darker. people need shadows - feel like manual paper collage.
3. ditto people comment - they're also too desaturated / gray. ditto chiaroscuro comment. marble size lines will help all these images
2. light uniform, chiaroscuro, etc etc. once sorted, this one will become amazing. source a special paper from LTDLTD (Mother of pearl-y?)
1. me likey. base of your building needs a bit of shadow as it meets the ground - is floating a tad.
best are probably 1+2. bottom one, if people are more integrated into image (they're too flat at the mo) could be good - but have to make sure attention is drawn to top (your project)verses bottom (your SCAN).
why not render a view of the confessionals so we can see the knees? all for now - you can email if you want.
did you get my comment - is not showing up on blog...?