I'm not crazy about the key, but it was the only way I cold think of that showed clearly the like points, the corners of wedges that had a common point. Suggestions?
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Monia said:
suggestions come tomorrow. the zoom in is not enough to get more information.
As first impression I will say more design and less color coding, but I will be more precise tomorrow after you show/explain the drawing.
Natasha Sandmeier said:
IF you need a key - or reference for the drawing, you should incorporate each piece of information where necessary in the drawing. But while it looks 'good' it doesn't carry the information it should - ie the surface texture, articulation, patterning, thick/thinness and relative light intrusion, the cuttings/openings, etc that all define your paths instead of red, yellow, blue.
but as a start, the drawing has lotsa potential! Just don't make it REPRESENTATIONAL, make it INFORMATIONAL.
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suggestions come tomorrow. the zoom in is not enough to get more information.
As first impression I will say more design and less color coding, but I will be more precise tomorrow after you show/explain the drawing.
IF you need a key - or reference for the drawing, you should incorporate each piece of information where necessary in the drawing. But while it looks 'good' it doesn't carry the information it should - ie the surface texture, articulation, patterning, thick/thinness and relative light intrusion, the cuttings/openings, etc that all define your paths instead of red, yellow, blue.
but as a start, the drawing has lotsa potential! Just don't make it REPRESENTATIONAL, make it INFORMATIONAL.