Hiya - for the 3rd image down, the abandoned area left behind as city moves on needs to appear much more ravaged as do the surrounding areas and fields. At the moment looks too much like a slightly modified google earth image - but you realy need to imaging the nature of this new post-linear city landscape. not only will the left-behind grid squares be completely depleted of life, but likely the bordering areas would also be devastated - make it more obvious and extreme. but is nice start.
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This page contains a single entry by Mickey Kloihofer published on October 28, 2009 2:17 AM.
Hiya - for the 3rd image down, the abandoned area left behind as city moves on needs to appear much more ravaged as do the surrounding areas and fields. At the moment looks too much like a slightly modified google earth image - but you realy need to imaging the nature of this new post-linear city landscape. not only will the left-behind grid squares be completely depleted of life, but likely the bordering areas would also be devastated - make it more obvious and extreme. but is nice start.