in your sections you need to be more specific. Have materials and colours are good but first of all we need to see more section lines related with material tickness/properties... now they are abostract sections with textures. Think more at detailed sections, we need to see how the columns touch the floor, what is the material tickness of the frame, how the pieces are connected... you need to be precise much much more it will help you for next year. so please take time and do it extremely well!
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This page contains a single entry by Maryam Pousti published on July 2, 2008 2:07 AM.
in your sections you need to be more specific. Have materials and colours are good but first of all we need to see more section lines related with material tickness/properties... now they are abostract sections with textures. Think more at detailed sections, we need to see how the columns touch the floor, what is the material tickness of the frame, how the pieces are connected... you need to be precise much much more it will help you for next year. so please take time and do it extremely well!