The pin-up or group tutorial was helpful in identifying how I should develop my project and presentation of the work simultaneously.
The following notes are the key points I took away from the feedback:
- Important to mention nesting at different scales (objects, spaces, buildings...) at the start of presentation as a lens through which to view the collapsed memories
- construct the view of the cupboard as a counterpart to the basement - both explore darkness but one is welcoming with defined limits while the other is endless.
- consider the other landmark buildings in the metropolis of mind - constructing counterpart views within them as a segue to the overall zoom out of the metropolis and the concept that the landmark of HOME is just one of many
- incorporate the Recon as a way of describing collapse, inflate and the mechanism of memory
- looking at memory through two types of haze: drug induced (Studio 54) and decay over time (childhood home)
- make sure the surreal and the haziness of memory is introduced into all views using the domain of control of the child as a constraint.
- provide contrast in some of the views between the child and adult perspective evolving over time
- Views to the outside world (letterbox/ windowsill) should hint at the metropolis of the mind/ stage-set quality of the view - good place to incorporate TS in how it is revealed
Important points to consider:
- how I describe the space to not be specific as to its function but rather to its experiential qualities so the audience can still input their memories.
- remove dollshouse doors from attic view and concentrate on the nesting within that space.
- dont include people - about the space and the individual's memory
Over the break, my goal is to start all the views outlined in the storyboard below:
As an idea for the corridor view, I thought i could play with illusions of changing the door sizes to heighten the depth of the corridor and alter its perception (adult/ vs. child)
I would also like to work more on the overview drawing on the space of the landmark that brings these moments of collapse together.
and will try to format existing work into whitebook format.