hi jake - thanks for posting this - we didn't really comment yesterday. It's a bit basic in terms of what you are deciding to show. Look quite carefully at the thickness of the shells - and how the balcony might split or shear from the primary wall. At the moment the balcony looks like a separate and additive structure. Also, it doesn't look as though you've considered the ground - the blunt flat base of the shells is incogruous with your concept and formal language.
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This page contains a single entry by Jake Choi published on November 13, 2007 8:14 PM.
hi jake - thanks for posting this - we didn't really comment yesterday. It's a bit basic in terms of what you are deciding to show. Look quite carefully at the thickness of the shells - and how the balcony might split or shear from the primary wall. At the moment the balcony looks like a separate and additive structure. Also, it doesn't look as though you've considered the ground - the blunt flat base of the shells is incogruous with your concept and formal language.