Argument Framed

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Over the last few days I have developed a structure/story for framing my argument.  To avoid misunderstandings, I have reviewed my text daily with an external correspondent to ensure simplification/clarity.

The premise of this move in my work is to advance from the recon.

The story below, outlines my critique on the identity of a city and ends in a proposition for the function of the passage.

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Two Identities of the City

 

 

The identity of the city is divided between an external image of the city and an internal image of the city.

 

The external image is the image perceived by individuals on the exterior of the city, and is predicated around its history and its monuments.

 

The internal image is the image perceived by individuals on the interior of the city, and is created through consumption and communication.

 

 

Identification

 

 

"The mirror is a virtual plane between the real and the representation of the real."

 

 

The external image of the city is divided from the internal image of the city through a metaphorical mirror.  Both the external and internal images are reflected against themselves, alienating them amongst the identity of the city as a whole.  The duplication of the image through reflection creates a continuity of the image, stripping down its sense of reality.

 

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As the city expands and intensifies, the perpetual duplication of the images within the mirror causes the identities to become suffocating.

 

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The individuals of the interior become conscious of the represented image through the intensity of exhaustion and suffocation, and begin to fight against the mirror for relief.

 

The individuals of the exterior become conscious of the represented image through the intensity of exhaustion and suffocation, and begin to fight against the mirror for relief.

 

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As the mirror is attacked from either side, it becomes scratched and distorted.  The image of the city becomes disrupted and confused.  The once perceived continuity becomes deceptive and begins to reveal the superficiality of its representation, and reality becomes questioned. 

 

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Inhabitation within the distorted image of the interior becomes threatening and delusional, as consumption and communication are repeated beyond control, and space becomes evasively liminal.

 

Inhabitation within the distorted image of the exterior becomes threatening and delusional, as historicity becomes fractured and skewed, and space becomes symbolically offensive.

 

 

The Exchange of Identity

 

 

The madness created by the distortion of the mirror motivates the individuals of either side to fight harder, forcing the mirror to rupture and fracture. 

 

Fragments of the mirror fall and shatter, reflecting new views of the city and reveal passages to the image beyond.

 

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The creation of passages opens the closed relationship between the internal and external image of the city, allowing for an informal and more comprehensive understanding of the city's identity as a whole.

 

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The passages become a space of exchange, where perspectives on the new image of the city can be placed in comparison and individual interpretations can be made.

 

 

The collapse of representation poses new questions and interpretations about the image of the city. 




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I have drawn a storyboard for the story, which I will present tomorrow.


Below is a preview of one of the boards.

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In tomorrow's tutorial, I hope to discuss representation for the story and my plans for developing the proposition of the passage.








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