very clear the first part, still from: "As glamour is a transformative device which produces an illusory effect...." it gets weak.
For now i am telling you just few points:
1_ you need to articulate how and why you use of fabric. Why? like it is clear the use of drappery in stone but what fabric gives you more? Is it becuase of the idea of transformation, the idea of dressing for different occasions? (like the wedding versus the funeral...)
2_Also i think when you say "Glamour in the Church was used during the Baroque period to dislocate people, by suspending the ordinary routine of their lives.." it can mean different things. I think when you were using the word "glamour was seducing..." it was more direct.
3_Then you state "As glamour is a transformative device which produces an illusory effect" and "By adopting the techniques of dressmaking,". I think these are the main points: it is clear what glamour is for you, what it creates and which techinque you use. I think this is the main thing and need to get elaborated. Like which type of illusory effect/s? where? how? how your technique makes possible the creation of this/these effect/s? ...
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very clear the first part, still from: "As glamour is a transformative device which produces an illusory effect...." it gets weak.
For now i am telling you just few points:
1_ you need to articulate how and why you use of fabric. Why? like it is clear the use of drappery in stone but what fabric gives you more? Is it becuase of the idea of transformation, the idea of dressing for different occasions? (like the wedding versus the funeral...)
2_Also i think when you say "Glamour in the Church was used during the Baroque period to dislocate people, by suspending the ordinary routine of their lives.." it can mean different things. I think when you were using the word "glamour was seducing..." it was more direct.
3_Then you state "As glamour is a transformative device which produces an illusory effect" and "By adopting the techniques of dressmaking,". I think these are the main points: it is clear what glamour is for you, what it creates and which techinque you use. I think this is the main thing and need to get elaborated. Like which type of illusory effect/s? where? how? how your technique makes possible the creation of this/these effect/s? ...