i like it almost:
the oranges look good
the greys need more greys
the yellows need more yellows
the greens look almost good
i don't like the area where you have only one colour (like some of the green) so i would fix that
and i don't like where is white (seems some of the paths, if i am not confusing with a light grey)
but for the rest i like it a lot.
Natasha Sandmeier said:
good start - agree with some of monia's comments.
the colour is a bit flat - and pushing your linework into obscurity (need to differentiate your levels / stairs, etc with a more varied and stepped colour). Keep your linework ON TOP, print frequently - pinup on your wall, stand back 2 meters - your linework should still be legible and clear. Also, we discussed yesterday the issue of boundary - is it absolute or do you allow for entry under the bridges via landscaping?
Jasem Alsadah said:
ur plans rawks !
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This page contains a single entry by Eleftherios Ambatzis published on November 28, 2007 7:07 PM.
i like it almost:
the oranges look good
the greys need more greys
the yellows need more yellows
the greens look almost good
i don't like the area where you have only one colour (like some of the green) so i would fix that
and i don't like where is white (seems some of the paths, if i am not confusing with a light grey)
but for the rest i like it a lot.
good start - agree with some of monia's comments.
the colour is a bit flat - and pushing your linework into obscurity (need to differentiate your levels / stairs, etc with a more varied and stepped colour). Keep your linework ON TOP, print frequently - pinup on your wall, stand back 2 meters - your linework should still be legible and clear. Also, we discussed yesterday the issue of boundary - is it absolute or do you allow for entry under the bridges via landscaping?
ur plans rawks !