5 plates composition
This is the whole sequence.


I want to print the "transitional" plates on 2 types of paper (gloss / matt) and let them also physically "flow" into each other.
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I really like the idea of the final plate being a proposal but i think that maybe the repetition of the cone takes away some of the power of the centre plate.. just a thought.. but looks stunning :-)
i agree with you on that one, but then at the same time the center and the final plate are actually talking about the same thing (the very essence of my statement): program as ONLY generator for the iconicity (while 3rd plate is the birth of program in the heart of the building, the 5th one is showing the program bleeding out into the city itself).
from a visual point of view though i must agree with you and maybe the impression could change if i make the cone appear less strong in the final plate.
or do you feel it has to go completely?
yes maybe it should just be less dominant so that the centre one really pops out
It's true Zoe, i never really noticed it before, but the 2nd cone is a bit too bold when seen as one long strip of plates. Also, blue sky distractingly bright. Would adjust that too if there's still time.
yes... I was not sure when I saw the cone and I remembered that the initial idea was to have the long front and the cone only in the middle. We can see tomorrow, but I think the best solution is scale it big again and see only the facade as you did it with the openings and the crowd. And we will see only the starting bit of the cone (with the first series of windows) with people and crowd.
But we can check tomorrow and see what is the best solution.